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The longest day

Missing image
Hours taunt me
with their torturous pace
they run the gauntlet with my mind,
It's now I curse the lords of time.

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  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    March 12

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    I like the way you took this prompt. Great choice of words and emotions. I curse time sometimes. I wish it went slower sometimes, then others I wish it would speed up.

  • unsigned gold member
    March 12
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    wonderfully put...
    Good luck...

    Simon


  • Wandika gold member
    March 12
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    A True Story

    lies within the 22 words you wrote here.

    Now where did I put that Island?


  • Poetry-and-rhyme
    March 12

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    oh how nice sis u done it again this is awesome hun so meaningful and best describes the pic