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Jake-17

Nothing.
Not so much as a smile.
I had put my head down on the table, resisting the urge to leap.
I banged my head on the wooden table, feeling the sun on my fingertips.
Then the boy was stupid and came to my side.

"Are you ok?" I didn't look up at his face...I just kept my head low.
Short.
Sweet.

"I'm fine" I respond, moving my fingers out of the sun's light. Habit I had picked up from the clan. Avoiding sunlight.
Then I heard the unbearable slide of a backpack down an arm, then a thud on the table's top.
A creak told me he had sat down beside me.
Great.

'Try to interact with humans more' I remember the words spoken clearly from Henry, and curse my love for him. 

Thus I raise my head and give a nice smile.
He smiles back.
Great, now I'm turning into a little submissive girl! I bite my lip to keep from yelling that at myself.

Ok Henry, you want sociable, I'll give you sociable.

"Hello, I'm Alice." I raise a hand for him to shake.
He takes my hand and shakes it softly, "And I am Jake."

We started talking mindlessly about little things in the school.
Jake is in my grade, a splendid sophomore, ready for the world.
I find he has a love for Sci-Fi books, and is intrigued with vampires.
This sparks my interest.
That day....my game began. 

Author notes

This one's a bit shorter then usual...sorry!

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  • Patwak919
    March 13, 2008

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    Well it may be short, but it is still great. I can't wait to see what happens with these two... Good job!

  • WoundedSoul
    March 13, 2008

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    Hmm... I have a big question running through my head about this... but I'm not sure whether I want to know the answer.


  • Chemical Muse
    March 13, 2008

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    ^^
    *happy dance and hug and steal*
    another great turn-out! i luv it, really i do. i hope there's a part 2 or even 3 to this...


    • Inverted-Hearts
      March 13, 2008
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      Actualy this is part 17 of the whole thing....you have to look through all my poems to find the others..

  • Mishi Mushi
    March 12, 2008

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    It doesn't matter that it's short! I still love it. And what's with this game? Is little vampire girl gonna nice? Write more!!


  • Lady of Remorse
    March 12, 2008

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    O.M.G.

    what game? come ON! You can't do this to us!!!! What Game?!?! Intrigued with vampires, spark of interest, game...!!!Ah what's going on now?!?! heehee
    do tell do tell

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