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Moonshine

The moon shines softly on your sleeping form
Roses covering your pillow
Their petals fluttering in the breeze
Which ripples the black lake
Your touch - cold as iron
And time is turning

Author notes

For want of a better title.

Thank you to Eusebius for the prompts. They were well chosen and have set my mind working.

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  • Eusebius
    March 12, 2008
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    bravo

    Very lovely, and you did this so well and so flawlessly! Loved it, loved it, absolutely loved it! bravo... bravo... bravo...