Tantalized eyes
by electric thighs,
fingers softly teasing,
ragged, racing breathing.
The softest of kiss
on neck causes bliss,
as hands roam higher,
raising passion’s fire.
Lips caress shoulder,
desire grows bolder,
curves, the hands reach
the most beautiful peach.
The sighs grow louder
and nipples stand prouder,
breath comes in gasps,
as urgent fingers grasp.
Legs open, inviting,
touch rhythmic, exciting,
tongue probing and roaming
brings arched back and groaning.
The night is still young,
telling all would be fun,
but you’ll give me more thanks
if you fill in the blanks.
Author notes
Picture Option No.7:
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o83/Nikki_108/Sensual%20Angels/making_out.jpg
Self-explanatory this one. It's all there on the page.
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Comments
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I love this you did a very great job with this hon thanks for entering good luck to you in the contest
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Love the flow and love the rhyme. Very hott and sexy!
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This is great!
Wonderful job putting this piece
together here. Thanks a lot for
sharing it and good luck to you
with it here!
Jeremy0826 -
What a perfectly dirty little write! Hot stuff you've created here. I enjoyed the rhyme and the last line just made me smile! Keep your pen to the page and thanks for entering!
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very nice with the rhyming. great job.. thank you
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Thank you very much.
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Moist
this has left me....unsatisfied, must find release....tease -
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Thank you, that very much was the intention lol. Sorry. Pratically every erotic piece you see just goes for it, all the way til the end, I wanted the reader to finish it off (pardon the pun) themselves in their minds.
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This is very hot indeed! I like the ultimate need that is reflected in this piece. Very horny and hot, I'm liking it. I like the rhyme in it, too.
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Thanks, I don't do rhyme often and this is the first time I've ever used it in an erotic piece. As for the need, unfortunately for me, it's a constant one lol
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