soft,
gentle persuasion,
coax,
infinite patience;
speak:
tone most important;
words:
inflection is all;
soothe,
gestures recurrent,
earn
trust, love, and respect
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I thought it was good until . . .
I read your comment that it is a play on words, then my mind raced in many directions and in a few of them I changed my mind to a very good poem. Great job - especially with the knowledge gained. ~ Timothy
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That is really beautiful. Sometimes short poems can be the most powerful. My favorite line of all is "infinite patience". Your word choices are all very gentle and sweet. Though you titled it "Puppy Love" it seems that this kind of love could go even deeper. Nice work overall!
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It was actually kind of a play on words...
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Sweet!
You just reminded me with your last line I've something to post! If the sentiment could be kept throughout life by lovers love would stay sweet indeed! Very nice.
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Wow,
Its so short but great.
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oh beautiful!
love this.
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Ahh you have picked your words well and laid them out superbly, so much has been said in barely a breath! Nice job
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i like this a lot! i think the one - three keeps a nice beat throughout this piece. I like the message also that it is sending, (at least to me)... well, great write, great read! thanks for sharing!
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