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Smile

You think you can change everything you did with a smile.
BAM
Gone.

The pain
The hurt
The suffering.
Lost with the flash of a grin.

I hate how you just
think
assume
that I'll forgive you.
But I won't
And a smile can't change that.

Author notes

yes just my life.

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  • stardust3492
    March 16, 2008

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    I like it a lot. You seemed to capture the emotion very nicely. I'm sorry you are going through this KT! I know what you're going through with this.

    Anyway, very good poem.
    ~ dust


  • my02U
    March 13, 2008
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    oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh im sorry kt!

    luv lovey


  • liduen silver member
    March 13, 2008
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    This is a very good show of emotion. I like how heart felt it is. Poor KT.


  • LuckyBlackCat
    March 12, 2008
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    about "u no who" doing "u no what" again? I thought so......
    it's ok KT (Turnstall lol)

    • StarIlluminated
      March 12, 2008
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      isn't it Tunstall? AND DON'T CALL ME THAT GRRRRRRR. I'm sorry, tis just annoying when people reference me to her.

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