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"Love slipped over my soul
Like nothing I’ve ever witnessed before.
Her skin like lace
Her eyes brightened her face.
She was mine for now and forever
She watched me curiously
As my hand slid up her shirt
I whisper can I do something
Just once is all I ask.
I promise I won’t do anything to hurt you
And all she could say was yes."

Poem-

Laying her upon the bed
She bites her lip
I slowly lift up her shirt
Taking it off oh so slowly
She starts to shiver
Her skin being tickled
My lips press gently along her belly
She watches me with anticipation.
Kissing around her belly button
My kisses becoming softer and lighter,
I allow my hand to gently drag my fingers
Along her breasts and down to her belly
I slowly stop kiss and sit up to watch her joy
She arches her back as my fingers encircle her nipples
I slide my free hand along her back and start to kiss
From her belly on up,
Her breathing is labored.
Her eyes shut only slightly.
My lips kiss around her breasts up to the nipple.
I slide my hands down to pants
And slowly slide them from her frame.
My hands slide gracefully along her thighs
Gently I draw circles around her inner thigh
I gently slide her nipple into my mouth
Sucking gently and pulling slightly
As her nipple slides from my lips I slide down her body
And kiss above where her panties lay.
I kiss along her panty line and down along her legs
Her gasp as I tease her makes her want more
She slides her hands threw my hair
And whispers silently please god take me here.
She moves me close to where she wants me.
I let out my breath I held in.
Her gentle moan was enough to say
More
I kiss her sensitive spot. And let my breathing be swift
Gently I licked along her inner thighs and came to her panties.
Slowly sliding them off she moaned knowing I could do so much more.
She bit her lip hard as I slid my tongue deep
She couldn't help it anymore.
She rocked her hips with my tongue.
Sliding it all around me slid out.
I kissed to her belly button and up to her breasts
She gasped as she looked at me wanting me back inside desperately
Her eyes begged and pleaded all I could do was whisper, I love you.
Slowly taking off my pants and boxers I slid deep inside of her
Her moans turn to screams of pleasure as she clawed deep into my back.
She moaned and I rocked with force enough to rock the bed
She and I made love that night.

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number 9 >.> no one under 18 should read please

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  • Little Blue Bird
    April 15, 2008
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    Panting for breath

    WOW Blitz....ummm... yeah...uh...


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 12, 2008

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    wowzers this is one hot write it left me reading caught my attention and the intesity n this piece is woww


    • BastMoon
      March 12, 2008
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      Thats my baby...he dont do nothin half way....especially not making love...

  • BastMoon
    March 12, 2008
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    *blushes* oh my....hehe...my mate!

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