Passed the stage of hello
and the shaky first kiss.
Still my heart races when I’m near you.
Someday maybe I’ll believe all this.
I will never intentionally hurt you,
or cause you any pain.
Never will my love for you stop.
I never want to be without you again.
Significance marks my meeting you.
Whenever I think of it;
how much I love you,
all of it seems to fit.
The feelings we have for each other,
I hope are never lost.
Forever is how long I’ll be with you,
even an eternity, no matter the cost.
Everything that has been said is true.
Like I said, I’ll never stop loving you.
A contest entry
- Love, Love, Love. No PW by LanguishedLad.
700 points, ended March 17, 2008, 20 entries
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300 points, ended April 21, 2008, 55 entries
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Comments
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well penned
Nice emotion and very well worded, thanks for your entry and best of luck in the contest
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A nice loving write. Shame it was full of cliches. Well done tho.
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Thanks
Thanks for the comment, I understand where you're coming from. This is one of my older poems, I like to tihink I've gotten better over the years.
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