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Be aware , you can change us

You didn't taught about it and neither I

That world can change with just a lie

That every move, step and word 

Has a faith in this enourmous world

 

You can do it ,so watch your word

try to be aware of why'd atack you for 

you know ,that you can change us all 

That with your words the world is a doll 

 

 

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  • Ellis gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Profound

    Truth is so important; also love
    Words really do matter
    The best words are the words I'm thinking of
    I think before I begin to chatter!

  • fantasylandthinker01
    May 2, 2008

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    kinda hard to understand with the wording but once u realize wat it says its a purty good poem good job