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Why Can’t You See It?

Why Can’t You See It?

More beautiful than a blooming flower
She wonders why she turns so many heads.
She stares downwards hour after hour
While men lie awake at home in their beds.
They lie there wondering what they could say.
Anything to make her forever theirs.
They wish for the same thing day after day.
Their desire is their only of cares.
Her chocolate-like eyes do not help at all
And her power to seduce frightens me.
She has a smile that makes grown men fall.
But this is something that she just can’t see.
    Of all that I know, this much must be true,
    She may not see it, but I know I do.

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  • Pureisolation
    March 15, 2008

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    thats such a wonderful poem i love it...i really do. I love how to expresses how beautiful this girl is and how she doent know..beautifuly written. thank you for sharing.