Giving faceless prayers,
twisted in polar knots ~
hanging in equilibrium
over violet flame ~
Author notes
Prompt:
"And as we laid ourselves to rest
we dreamt of life and woke to death"
- twistedstranger @ AP
A contest entry
- 10PoetsX13WordsX15Minutes by Exodus.
450 points, ended March 13, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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beautiful bro...most magnificent...hope you are okay, haven't heard from you in a while
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Beautiful use of language topped by an appropriate theme. Really lovely, thank you
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twinny what on earth are you on about this is incredibly better than mine that i shall now burn mine
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Wow, this is really good! I love what you have done with the prompt! Keep it up!
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