I love it when you make me scream.
Jubilant cries of agony.
I love it when you make me cry,
sounds of joy that echo through the night.
I love it when you sink your teeth
into my wanting flesh.
I love the things you do,
as I kiss my way down your breast.
The panting, the breathing, sounds that fill the air
fingers running through long and silken hair.
The scent of your perfume,
that sweet smell that seduces me.
I love the way you scream my name each time
we dance our intimate waltz at night.
I get drunk off the wine of your kiss.
I'm drowning in utter bliss.
Author notes
Well this my first attempt at an erotic poem. I tried not to make it to dirty.
A contest entry
- kamasutra by Godless But Divine.
650 points, ended March 13, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sexual Sensations ~ Creamy Interpretations by Still Standing.
1800 points, ended July 17, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this shows your creativity, sensual and a bit erotic, it is a great write and I wish you all the best in the contest.
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Good
I like this as a novice erotic writer myself I can appreciate the fact you held back some. It was still very sensual and very erotic indeed. Nice visuals and I love the tone of the poem!
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Well I think that you have done an awesome job on this. I love the feeling behind the words and though it's not to dirty it's extremely hotttt!!!!!
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