just 4 u
id do anything
name it and itll be done
just 4 u
ill give u anything
name it and the world will be yours
just 4 u
ill never lie
and ill always be true
just 4u
ill bleed my soul
just to try and fix ur holes
I love you
A contest entry
- will you help me i want enteries please come! by xXgabbybearXx.
1200 points, ended March 14, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Writing, Love, Nature, or something else! (in other words, OPTIONS & points!) by Chocoholic156.
790 points, ended May 29, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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There is no prompt in your notes. You didn't follow the rules.
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The only thing this poem did for me was remind me of another rule I should have added.
This is a very sweet poem but the chat speak just really turned me off. This doesn't work for me. If you cannot use actual words for poems I don't think it is actual writing. -
This is very lovely
I love the last stanza as well! Good luck to you in the contest!
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just 4u
ill bleed my soul
just to try and fix ur holes
i like that part, alot, im not sure why but it strikes me in a great way. i love it thanlk you for writing it and please keep writeing.
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THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!!
i love this poem.
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i like this!...
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love it you were right its good
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Like the form. Is there a name for it? It's upbeat and I especially like the 4s, placed so precisely. A nice expression of caring.
jjj
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nice i like it thank you for entering i wish you the best
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