We all ask,
What shape can describe
The shape of out path in this world?
Looking within a circle, there are so many
ways to stay on track. A few of these unfortunately
keep us on such a strict lifestyle, we never get a chance
to really do the things we want to do, forcing us to make our
own path, straying from our circle. We leave those who travel the
circle with the rest of the world. We say goodbye to our friends
and leave to finally see outside the circle, but in the end, we
see it was never the circle we chose to get away from, it
the monotony of life we couldn’t stand, so we leave
To see a different life outside our own world
Hoping to be treated differently there,
Maybe treated as an equal.
Only maybe.
In a list
What do you think?
Comments
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what a visually appealing piece you've constructed. i especially liked the last line "only maybe", and "the monotony of life we couldn’t stand". the only minor thing i might point out is line 3 says "the shape of OUT path", which i assume should be our. other than that, great piece!
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