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Surreal

Poisons little daggars
Weapons of decay

Blacked shedding wounds
The special of the day

Worms and little maggots
Have become my friends

Love has abanoned me
Hatrid took me in

Sleeping is a mystery
One the living take for granted

Life is pointless
But death is jagged

Life is cruel
Dieing's not much better

Life has no mercy
Death has aplenty

Laying in this pointless grave
Dieing more with every day

Death you have one my heart
Life has stuck in the knife

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  • zillion
    March 14, 2008
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    'Sureal' should be 'surreal'. Life certainly has no mercy, though I would say death doesn't either.