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[ A Christmas song for the poor, ]

A bullet for my valentine,
A Christmas song for the poor,
Pondering one’s love,
Or if she’s a dirty whore,

Just a deep cut nothing to fear,
Everything will be alright,
What a lovely saying,
Don’t you think my dear?

It’s nothing but sorry,
And if I could draw a picture,
Nothing would be the topic,
Nothing would be the story,

It’s a fast acting pill,
Don’t suppress the feelings,
I’m not a shrink,
So, how does that make you feel?

Listen to the beat of the music,
It really doesn't make that much sense,
Flow along like a river,
And be my little....squishy,

Die a harmful...harmless death,
But please don't kiss me like you had before,
This is the only tie,
This is the Christmas song for the poor.

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  • Dirty and Broken
    March 12, 2008
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    i don't get it.....O.o


    • Rize
      March 13, 2008
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      I dont think its really for people to try to understand...its they either do or they dont...if you do that's great, if you dont..no big deal....i dont know...i guess i just didn't want to make sense with this one....


  • xRigoRxMortiSx
    March 12, 2008

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    lovely....

    I like it....it has rythem but you change the rhyming schemeso there is like no rhyme...overall tho....quite bitchn


    • Rize
      March 12, 2008
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      i know i reread it and yes i broke the ryme...my bad


    • Rize
      March 12, 2008
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      why didnt you tell me that you were on...damn it...but thank you for the comment anyways...love it

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