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Fantasies

Fantasies of the mind,
How can this be;
They know I have died.

Author notes

"And as we laid ourselves to rest
we dreamt of life and woke to death"
- twistedstranger @ AP

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  • Exodus gold member
    March 13, 2008
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    Simple, to the point, effective.
    Thank you


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 12, 2008

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    wow twinny your words are so simply used but with such an emmense effect it speaks so much.well done beautiful


  • N e a r
    March 12, 2008

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    Unexpected ending - really gives the reader something to think on.
    Almost like a brain teaser.
    Awesome.


  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    March 12, 2008
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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 12, 2008
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    Good take on it!



    *poke*

  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 12, 2008
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    Good luck sis!

    *poke*

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