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Sleep Tight

Sleep brings causality coda
with breath cessation
one sixteenth degree
to coffin closure

Author notes

"And as we laid ourselves to rest
we dreamt of life and woke to death"
- twistedstranger @ AP


"Sleep is one sixtieth of death" - Babylonian Talmud(I felt the number should be higher)

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  • Tattboyspet
    March 13, 2008

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    the last two lines were wonderful!
    ~nodding head~ yep - got all of this and enjoyed it thoroughly


  • Exodus gold member
    March 12, 2008

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    Now I feel bad about liking to sleep in
    Excellent as always hun,
    Beautiful use of language, hell even the format works.
    I hate the talented


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 12, 2008

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    o0o0o i loved this.it fits perfectly.can i pull out now coz I got no chance against you. hehe well done bro


  • N e a r
    March 12, 2008
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    Fits perfectly.
    Amazing!


  • Naridill gold member
    March 12, 2008
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    !!!

    Loved it.

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