I'm gonna get drunk
I wanna get faded
Get so fucked up
That my mind is jaded
It will be nice
Not to think for a while
Pass me that Jager
It's just my style
So here we go
I down a shot
Give me a bowl
So we can smoke some pot
It's true what they say
I'm a fucking lush
But everything I do
I keep hush hush
A contest entry
- So you're a poet huh? {{{PREWRITES WELCOME}}} TAKE 2 by Melissa Burns.
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Wow kinda reminds me of someone i know :| this is very well written and i liked it alot. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
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Shelly -
i can totally relate to this poem on so many levels! amazing! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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Well, well, well, If you haven't noticed I'm 13 and not much of a drunk, nor drug addict. Not really into that whole thing. Couldn't understand which swearing words went where because it showed up as *bunny*. Anywho, Good write? Thanks for your entry and good luck!
+ Jackie -
this is cute and describingly obvious. Thsnks fro entering and i hope to read more from you soon.
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thank you for entering and good luck
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LOL. The last lines were wonderful!! Good luck in the contest.
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I love the last few lines, ...' I'm a fucking llush, but everything I do, I keep hush hush' interesting poem
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