When people see the girl I am,
they see someone shy.
Not the person they want to see,
so they walk on by.
They don't open their eyes,
to the girl she could be.
But they only use their eyes,
and not their hearts to see.
They pass this girl by,
without even saying hello.
So what kind of freind she would be,
they will never know.
A few years pass,
and now they see.
What a beautiful girl,
she turned out to be.
They smile and wave,
but she turns around.
They don't understand,
why she left them to frown.
The look and stare,
as she walks on by.
She passes them,
without even a good-bye.
They call out her name,
but she pays no mind.
She remembers how,
they were so unkind.
So now she has freinds,
that see into her heart.
Instead of pushing her away,
right from the start.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent
Wow this is written so well. Oh how I could relate to this during a season of my own life. You are a incredibly young gifted poet. I loved this and it made me feel a lot of different feelings. The imagery is great as well as the rhyme and flow. Thank you for sharing your gift with me. I also wanted to thank you for commenting on my poem.
Wishing You Many Blessings,
Kelle Marie
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thanks becca
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wow
THIS IS REALLY GOOD
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