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Roses

Roses
Shows love
Romantic and sweet
Good smells
Shows feelings
Great gift
Wonderful aroma
-Reflect-
Aroma wonderful
Gift great
Feelings show
Smells good
Sweet and romantic
Love shows
Roses

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  • I-hope-im-not-alone
    March 26, 2008
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    perty poem i love it!


  • LanguishedLad
    March 12, 2008

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    Thanks for entering

    Its a good write but i feel its lacking a bit of flow and it feels as if you rushed while writing it. Regardless of that, thankyou for entering and best of luck in the contest.