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I Just Wanna Sing Love Songs

I don't know nothing
because I've lost all control,
and I don't have a clue,
because you just don't know

I'm standing outside a window looking in,
waiting for the end of it it all,
when it had no time to begin

I waited and wandered
and I guess lost it all
to have never climbed the tree
it's amazing how far you can fall

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  • BraunwynCleanslate
    March 17, 2008

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    Longing

    Unrequited love...ain't it great.

    I really thought the last two lines were very poetic and ended the piece well.