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Sincity

Part 1

He’s stolen his best friends ex
She wanted to be his next
He’s cheated on his 3rd wife
He says its his life
She’s stolen all his money
His jokes are no longer funny

Baby you’re living in sin city
You’ve left behind an unfinished symphony
Baby you’re the owner of sin city
Forever lost in your pain anger and self pity
Baby you’re moving to sin city
Remember to share your love equally

She’s drugged up and so out of it
He’s calm again but still needs it
She’s selling herself and wasting away
She had it all but threw it away
He’s giving her more, she’s feeling high
She’s gone and now its lie after lie

Baby you’re living in sin city
You’ve left behind an unfinished symphony
Baby you’re the owner of sin city
Forever lost in your pain anger and self pity
Baby you’re moving to sin city
It exclusive and getting in is pretty tricky

He’s drinking some more and lashing out
She doesn’t have the strength to shout
She’s looking at him and he feels so sick
But then he gives her another kick
She’s praying to god on her bruised knees
‘I love him look after him please’

Baby you’re living in sin city
You’ve left behind an unfinished symphony
Baby you’re the owner of sin city
Forever lost in your pain anger and self pity
Baby you’re moving to sin city
It exclusive and getting in is pretty tricky

He’s feeling all suicidal
His life isn’t worthwhile
She’s jumping off the bridge
Left a note on the fridge
He’s hanging from the ceiling
His life had no meaning
She’s feeling all suicidal
Her life isn’t worthwhile

Baby you’re living in sin city
You’ve left behind an unfinished symphony
Baby you’re the owner of sin city
Forever lost in your pain anger and self pity
Baby you’re moving to sin city
It exclusive and getting in is pretty tricky
Baby you’re trapped in sin city

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I'm kinda angry so...

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  • darkwings
    March 27
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    powerful words man

    i feel it lol. i realy like it as i said powerful and it flows well. over all awesome


  • bradsyourdad
    March 25
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    Wow.... this is very very good... it inspires me.


    • Sf
      March 25
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      Ooh... never inspired someone before...
  • WOW!

    That was amazing! And truly deserves music in the background! YOu should send this to a band! It has everything it needs. You, my dear, should get angry more often.


    • Sf
      March 25
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      lol... be careful what you wish for... thanks for commenting...

  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 18

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    WOW!! Anger works well for your muse hunni! This is flippin awesome! The darkness is so captivating as is the imagery painted throughout, my new favourite by you! Re~angry, you know where I am if you need to vent hun, got 2 blast proof ears Superbly penned


    • Sf
      March 25
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      Thank you... hmmm... I'm just kinda pissed off at that stupid cow... not really much else to say about it... but thank you...
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