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Rainbow Shades

Moving along with the wind
I swing
In rainbow shades
That paint the myriad chords
Of my soul with different strokes
To play
Different notes
But only to create
One single tune that would imbibe
Every enlightened speck of voice,
Each serene ray of light,
From every beckoning beacon bright
Deep seated in the sea of soul
Like a heart-shaped lighthouse
To sound like a prayer-
The purest of all songs
That echoes
In the spectrum of the wind
And I sing.

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  • peaceimout
    June 20

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    Beautiful and so full of life! Thank you so much for entering and good luck


  • Manoj Sanyal
    March 22

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    good poem...
    Thanks for your participation.
    Good luck,

  • eternal-devotion
    March 5

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    Very creative.

    The way in which you have penned this I can hear in your song the song of the wind. The colors of the rainbow are very vivid for me in this, as the soul has many dementions and colors to it. The sound of the wind and the singing of your soul send a prayer to those of us who would take time to absorb what you have written. Delicate and beautifully done.


  • Puppydog gold member
    December 19, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    Oh to just let one self walk among the wonders of nature and let its beauty shine in us so we can let it come out like a song from our hearts.'s


  • Beverlynohime
    December 19, 2008

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    This is absolutely beautiful in every single way. Every word is perfect. Every thought Amazing! Good Job!


  • Aliya Abbas
    July 19, 2008

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    marvellous

    such a beautiful piece of write. just loved it.
    Like a heart-shaped lighthouse
    To sound like a prayer-
    The purest of all songs
    these lines are great.

  • luvdrkchocolate
    April 6, 2008

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    Oh. This is a very light hearted poem that you have written here. I thought it was very sweet and gentle. It kind of makes me think of my childhood and the little girl I used to be that loved bright colors and unicorns. I thought that it was very cute and uplifting. You did a good job of expressing yourself here.


  • Creatress silver member
    March 13, 2008

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    And I sing. well done. really liked the ending how you tied it all together. this was really beautiful. everyone loves a rainbow.
    pen on poet
    creatress


  • MissyMouse
    March 12, 2008

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    I can relate to the joy of singing, and playing an insturment. I sing surprano and play the clarinet. I like your reference to the heart shaped lighthouse. It makes my heart swell with the tiniest bit of joy. =)


  • jbbrandi
    March 12, 2008

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    Beautiful

    This is written beautifully. The imagery and your words are just so deep and...wow, speechless. Ok, you did REALLY well in writing this. Awesome job!

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