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Birth of a rainbow

 



Heaven's kaleidoscope shattered;
angels mop the skies
shedding silver tears -
mystical arc blossomed.

 

 

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sunflowerpoet.

13 words.

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  • Naridill gold member
    March 16, 2008

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    Not sure about last line - but before that - the imagery is gasping. Very clever and beautiful.
    Thanks for entering,