memories
echo compositions
that fade into visions
where whispers
paint traces of grey
and rebirth
awaken symphonies
and, as time lapses
into snuggled comfort
thoughts linger kindness
to my weary soul
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired..... by the cinnamon spider.
550 points, ended March 20, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Frans a lovely poem that rolled of my tongue,
this is a gentle write from a gentleman.
Good luck
Dolores xx
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Memories Huh
This is a very true deep emotional write to me. For as you said,
and, as time lapses
into snuggled comfort
thoughts linger kindness
to my weary soul
Such deep meaning with so few words. The flow of the poem is perfect and I loved it. Sorry my poem disturbed you tonight. I wish you well with your class Frans.
Many Blessings
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Quite Good
I'm back on your patch Frans as promised.
A nice little poem flows well deep meanings afoot
subtle meanderings, overall I liked reading it
my today's poem is called"Peter's Girl" see what you think George(JUDMC)U.K. -
this is very pretty and well written!!
=)
thank you for entering the contest! good luck!
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