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The Other Side of the Rainbow

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“There is a place where you can see stardust fall,

Where flowers sing and grow enormously tall.”

 

Pleasant thoughts drift all the day, ready
to be plucked from the air, and no one is
concerned about how you look.


Children play carefree all the day, and candy

colored clouds surround them, with

marshmallows bobbing in a hot chocolate sea.

Birds flock to sing your favorite songs while
leprechauns dance throwing gold high
into the air, happy to share.

Purple hippos frolic playing hide and seek
with tangerine lions and lime green cows
in fields of four leaved clover,

and you can eat anything you want because
food is just thought, and no one is
distraught over worries of life.

 

Butterflies alight upon your shoulder
to whisper secrets in your ear and
gently tickle as they sigh.

Smiles are required to be worn with
care, but if you don’t feel like it
they’ll give you one to wear and

in this land you'll find no pain or

sorrow, as only happiness abounds on
the other side of the rainbow.

Author notes

This is the collaboration effort between myself and EmeraldEyes, hope you enjoy.

We love you Charlotte!

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  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 12

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    What a place of beauty and fun. We could all do with a week somewhere like that to shake off all worries and sadness. A lovely write and very well done the two of you.

  • 'Butterflies alight upon your shoulder
    to whisper secrets in your ear and
    gently tickle as they sigh.'

    The above lines are marvellous!
    Your images are beautiful and concrete.

    Rahi

  • mzmikki silver member
    March 12
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    This is wonderful I wish I lived there!!!


  • Faithbound gold member
    March 12
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    This is a place I would love to visit. Very nice imagery.

  • and I love you both to. even as I read this a second time it brings happy tears to my eyes and makes me feel like everything is ok for the first time. you two are beautiful at writing together and I love you with all my heart


  • MetalTearz
    March 12
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    this is great hun

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 12

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    What a fabulous collaboration you have both done... blends so beautifully it is hard to tell who has written what, which just makes it all that more fabulous!!

    Ohhh if only we could all go to that place...

    This is such a special gift for who it is intended.

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