Unwillingly I gained weird emotions
Slowly I succumb to them like a slave
Made me strife after twisting my notions
Deeply felt, yet know not why to them I enslave
The sever of angels, taking them down
Horrific visions now are graphical in my head
Panic became a kingdom upon it a sultan that frowns
Cutting angels' wings, to paint a nightmare in bed
After spirits combined as one
Revealing the heart as well as soul
Emotions rose from depth to shine with the sun
Never heard such woe of an angel's slaughter before
Visions torment me at night time
Fixing wonder in sleepy minds & eyes to rain
Hence 'tis not my vision nor my crime
Why should I suffer someone else's pain
Seeked not the source, yet the situation
After finding heaven a dead nation
Is it a gift from death as another creation
Mighty this be the end, or just the beginning of salvation
Author notes
**Special Note: Vol 1 of this piece can be viewed at http://allpoetry.com/ConcreteAngel06 **
Vol 1 is entitled: Divine Perceptions
Have you ever felt like this before?
Comments
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This is such a great write, you have done a wonderful job with this,
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Perfectly Awesome
Great write, you two did an awesome job on this , excellent word choice and imagery and it's content is very thought provoking, this has to be one of the best poems i've read on this site.
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I was sent here by AP poet "ConcreteAngle06/God's Heart" telling me of your work.
The environment, in which we live, carries all kinds of emotions that have been released by the human beings, just like the Radio waves and TV signals and these signals interact within various ways with the environment. So it is very easy to pick up these emotions from the environment and their force can take over our mind and thoughts. Sometimes, we just slip from the visible world into the invisible world within our dreams. And we find the key to unlock the secrets of our lives and solve our problems.
I think this is a very deep and carefully crafted poem that makes you think about the world we live in and our relationship with the almighty. There is a beginning within the end and the end within the beginning. This is just a cycle of life and death within the nature of this universe. The dance of life and death will continue until we find the edge of time. I really enjoyed this poem...thank you
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Unique Views
What a strong write about life after death. What you expect in a new beginning or the end.....excellent write full of some vivid deep thoughts.....novy
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