Pirouettes of envy
tiptoe in
prima donna tutu.
Rebellion to conformity
dares,
in black, leather stilettoes.
Feathered flock pale;
unseen.
Author notes
Prompt: http://photosbydolph.deviantart.com/art/My-Mom-Made-Me-Take-This-Class-25632448
(20 words)
In a list
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt by Aussie Gypsy.
550 points, ended March 21, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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ah the dark winged ballerina, flutters in on a wind of sighs and takes the eyes of all the men who stare - a good penning.
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Brilliant! Wow, what more can I say. No wonder you won gold. Truly deserved. Congratulations and many blessings, Lavender Butterfly.
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Fan-fudging-tastic! This just screams so calmly from the page it is almost like a slep in the face I absolutely love this
♥
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Manda
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Wonderful!
Brilliant take on the oicture prompt.
Reckon there's a dominatrix in the group now to show the other ladies how it's done
Great write!
Wish you the best in the contest!
Much love, many blessings,
~David~
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prima dona tutu
I like that phrase! It put a smile on my face! besides its so exocticly worded that it leaves me in awe! Wonderful write!
All da best!
pri
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Rebelling against confirmity... definitely what this pic is all about!
Wonderful write!
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black leather stilletos, kinky good luck xx
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awww this is such a cute write and I love the life that comes from your words. I could just image all my friends at dance/acting school
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