man don't you hate it
when you know something is going to happen
like you can taste it?
you have absolutely no control.
i just close my eyes
and take it in cause i know its coming.
eyes are like death.
they both are an amazing thing.
they are your communication with the world.
through them you suffer the most pain,
you show the dearest love,
and you spread the most contagious thought.
On the edge of being...
What a beautiful feeling.
A contest entry
- Because we're not sick of options yet. by Viva La Vie Boheme.
600 points, ended March 25, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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