I hate you for everything you are
I hate you for all you do
I hate that you used me
I hate you for you
I know that's what you wanted
I'm glad you're getting what you deserve
But no one wants you the way you are
I hope your thoughts are haunted
By the touch of me
The taste of me
The way I'm NOT you
Niceness is too much for you
You tried so hard not to care
But I know you
You'll think of me...
...even while with her.
So enjoy her
Relax
I won't ever get in the way
You've doomed yourself to the misery
I always knew you'd pay
Cause no one else is like me
I'm a one in a million girl
You gave me up, you screwed up
Forever, I know you'll see it that way.
Author notes
Just some thoughts I needed to get out from a now dead relationship. Hope you enjoyed
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Very Nicely Done
Best poem that I have read in the past couple of days. I think that this work speaks from the heart. Very well written. I hope that this piece is appreciated by other people as well.
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Alot of pain. I know for a fact, that that person will get what they deserve. No good can come of a relationship predicated on infidelity. Great Job.
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intense
seems like there is raw pain in this....
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very well put words of sarrow and hate, it's good to get them out and not dwell on them again. good luck in the future!
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meh... truth be told the bastard wont feel sorry... and even if he is and crawls back like a pethetic heap of crying flesh... well... if he does that would you take him back? Dignity and games... one be lucky to ever find love worthy of a poem. Even less are the chances to find love to another person that is worthy of a happy poem... but hey... love brings inspiration and as the fools we are we accept... yay for us.
All in all I love the rythm in it, a good flow.. I could almost hear some sobbing in the background.
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Sentiments well expressed in these lines - easy to read and understand how you feel. We often think like that after a break up - they'll be sorry cause they don't know what they're lost. And this can be so true. We are lucky we got rid of them cause we know they're not the one for us anyway.
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I liked it! Very full of emotion and power throughout the entire thing. I hope it went down a little better than the poem suggests, and that you're doing a lot better now! Awesome write!
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