cant show my face
lied to my tears
wandered alone
not facing my fears
waiting for all
to come again
and apologize thrice
get rid of the men
gone with the waves
wiping my life away
im sorry for everything
that i had to betray
find me tonight
amongst the crowds
unless you're too busy
your head in the clouds
tell him everything
show him what i mean
tell him i dont care
unless we're eighteen
but we're gone
and we're dust
killed by your tongue
my tears are my distrust
Author notes
mkayyy so....
this is the first poem
in a new series
and i wont post again
till everybody's commented
not telling who its about
mkay randommm...good?
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mkayyyy... so i like da part thats all like :
'find me tonight
amongst the crowds
unless you're too busy
your head in the clouds
tell him everything
show him what i mean
tell him i dont care
unless we're eighteen'
i like it ahhhton =D -
i like it. i'm starting to get used to your writing style. i really like the way you write. i liked the begining the best. the 18 part was weird but yea. i liked it
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18th line??
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thanks for not telling
its cute and i love the imagery i'm not sure what you're writing about but it seems like to strong a feeling to be something you haven't experienced so. gag. this is goooddd. =] -
No need to telll!! LOL... but is sounds like what happend to day.
gone with the waves
wiping my life away
im sorry for everything
that i had to betray
OMG I love it!! That is what reminds me of today! -
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tell him everything
show him what i mean
tell him i dont care
unless we're eighteen
lol dont you love taht last line!??! lololol -
lol kind of....but i wrote this yesterday night when nobody was home..
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