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I bid farwell to winter.

I bid farewell to winter

and embrace the awakening spring

You're like C.P.R to this earth

'cause hearts beat when you sing.

 

 

I'll say hello to the daffodils

with their frilly Easter bonnets

and sit there by their side

and compose some nature sonnets.

 

 

So goodbye to you old winter

with your cold coloured blue's

i write this poem to springtime

in appreciation of her hue's.

 

I love to watch you every year

as your mother gives rebirth...

To daffodils and snowdrops

and all life upon this earth.

 

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  • Heva Feva
    October 15

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    This is so cool! I really like this bit:
    "I'll say hello to the daffodils
    with their frilly Easter bonnets
    and sit there by their side
    and compose some nature sonnets"


    Thank you so much for entering my contest, I love your poem! Good luck...
    -heva


  • crazymomma
    April 15, 2008
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    Great rhyme scheme and imagery. Thanks for entering


  • Survivingbychance
    March 15, 2008
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    Wow, this is so insightful. I think it's way, WAY better than mine. Good luck with the contest!


  • Celtic Legend
    March 12, 2008
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    that is very beautiful! i love springtime ♥


  • Sagerider
    March 11, 2008

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    I'm looking forward to it.

    Beautiful, I am certainly ready. Windy and cold today, it felt like a November hunt in the wheat stubble, even though the daffodils are getting ready to bloom. I loved it.


  • FransB gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    A lovely poem - and yes, we through your eyes can see. There is 'spring' in your Spring, and I am glad you shared this with me. Good luck. Frans


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    Ok... so where is the picture of Ireland in Spring???
    We so want to see it!!! Great poem. C & J x


  • Pure Thought silver member
    March 11, 2008
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    YAY ! ! !

    I'm with you on this joyful ode to Spring


  • storiesuntold gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    Excellent write here

    I truly love the gentlness you gave to this write and the daffodils in their bonnetes that just too cute good luck in the contest


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    Oh my...how lovely this is! Just like a song on my lips! Thank you so much and best of luck!!!

    Blessings~
    Az

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