I give you this rose,
it signifies nothing greater than my love
sooner that now, it will one day die
but my love,
my love is forever
an impossible love,
that never stops, never drys up,
that is not part of a game,
or a part of chance
a love that continuously spins
and no matter what you do
or how you live your life
there is always more to give
© 2008, Angie Romans. All rights reserved.
No republication of this material, in any form or medium, is permitted without express permission of the author.
Comments
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Very nice write.
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hmm... this poem really made me think a bit. I really like how you used this whole metaphor of love and a rose. It was very beautifully portrayed. The format is great too!! I love how the line, "there is always more to give" is separated from the other lines. it makes it that much more intense and important. Great work!! and Keep writing!!
Alex -
hmm an interesting poem i like the wa you used the rose to signify your love, and also you say how your love is unlike the rose that you give, i like the origanalty of this write.
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