White lace fallingfrom the apocalyptic sky
every blade of grass,
every leaf frozen.
Ice crunching under our feet
your words freeze in the air
falling to the hard earth
with a soft clink.
the bitterly cold wind
wrapping around our hearts
beating in time against
chests pressed together.
Its so cold but
I don't care if we freeze
into love popsicles,
just stay here with me.
Author notes
Dunno about the title. Suggestions?
A contest entry
- all the prewrites you want by serenity silvermoon.
600 points, ended March 29, 2008, 150 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"stay with me at all cost" is a good title this one was great it sounds like me and my hubby thanks for sharing god bless you forever and always love dianna lee green also knowned as serenity lynn silvermoon
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Thank you very much for the suggestion, I couldn't think of ANYTHING. D:
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