naked
in a tree
she tempts me
thin white stick
between wet lips
and i crumble
as the earth
beneath my stance
thickened air divide
allows my stride
on deep blue waters
where her true colors
swim and breath
and coalesce and separate
i turn away and back
as science fiction
feeds me my addiction
knowing never will i be
in sleep nor in awake
bequeathed her deity
Author notes
Based on a wierd dream I had some 20 years ago... lol
A contest entry
- What Is Your Fantasy? by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended March 27, 2008, 7 entries
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Thank you for entering my contest. I like this poem, but I am having trouble understanding this stanza. Did you miss a word or am I just dense?
i turn away and back
as science fiction
feeds me my addiction
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means i hesitate but continue
because the buzz is good... lol
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the poet with a style...i salute to ya! I can relate to the abstractness in the work and i like it!!! great job!!!
pri
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Thanks... lol. The dream got much better after that only I don't remember all the details.
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thats good! Some dreams can be weird...really i mean!
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