You stabbed me in the back.
It was unexpected
~Revenge
I told you all my secrets.
I heard them in the hall the next day.
~Revenge
I told you who I liked.
Why is it that he stays clear of me now?
~Revenge
You told him I had a disease!
Then I found out you liked him too.
~Revenge
You took my trust for granted.
Who do I trust now?
~Revenge
This I would never do to you,
but I'm starting to see that I just might have too.
I just might and it won't be easy.
For I still hold your friendship in my heart.
Revenge is not what I want to do,
but revenge is what I will get.
Author notes
This poem is about no one that I know or use to know. Just something I thought about and wrote it down. Lol. =]
A contest entry
- !GOSSIP! by ForeverLastingComa.
450 points, ended May 18, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Wat cha think?
Comments
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thats a bit creey lolz..=p in a good way though, i like how you kept saying revenge as if you were haunting the reader. Might want to use spell check though. my favorite lines were,
"I just might and it won't be easy.
For I still hold your friendship in my heart.
Revenge is not what I want to do,
but reven is what I will get."
although reven should be revenge those were my favorite lines.
Thank you for entering and Good Luck
~*ForeverLastingComa aka Leesha*~ -
um. im scared of you now. lol jk jk. but great poem
~moose~ -
. . .
. . . i'm scared . . .
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Revenge is not what I want to do,
but reven is what I will get.
I loveed that last line there
it was wow.
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