Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Keep Your Empty Promises

You can fill the air with all your empty promises
But it won't mean a thing.
I know you'll end up just like all the rest.
It doesn't matter what you say.
I know me better than you do.
And, trust me, you've already failed my test.
We grew too close too fast
Until we were too close for comfort
And one of us had to back away.
So soon we were too far to bear
And it stayed that way too long.
That's how we got where we are today.
I knew you'd be just like the rest.
You should have believed me when I said
"I'm never close to someone more than a year."
You tried to prove me wrong.
You wanted to be the one to change it.
But everything with you was worse than I feared.

So keep your fucking promises
Where they belong - your mouth.
You wouldn't be able to sway me anyway.

Author notes

It applies to way too many people.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 6 of 6

  • Pebbles luvs BamBam
    March 30, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is good I like the way it shows your feelings really good.. you did an awesome job on this one love it...
    Love Ashtyn


  • BAMFNx3
    March 13, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Wow Sonya. This was really good. I could deffinately relate. I loved every line.Beauitful job.

    <3


  • Captain Obvious
    March 12, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    too amazing for words.


  • honorable mention
    March 12, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    in somepoint in my life, any friend best friend or aquantence i had left. i kno the feeling it sucks. i will be your friend, cuz i know what its like. take care.


  • Scarlet-M
    March 12, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Ouch.
    Angry.
    And sad.

    Great job.


  • infernalxfidelity
    March 12, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    this is probably the most angry poem i've read from you. but that doesn't make it any less good. it was really good. but i'm sorry you feel like this.

    <3julia

1 - 6 of 6