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Star-Nymph...

Missing image

Of diamond facets,
sweet vision of beauty
Before me she stood in silent enjoyment;
her warm body sparkles,

observes her surroundings.

 

Star-nymph, dances, then,

whispers with low haunting laugh,

"What you seek is what you be, 

and will reap only

what in deepest dreams you see..."

 

 

 

 

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**Art Credits: Fairy Light
Author: Unknown

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    May 13, 2008
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    OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!!!
    Love this. Thank you for entering my contest



    Delila


  • Angelflower
    April 1, 2008
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    Now if only to find the words that could really bring this piece justice...
    Such a beautiful image you bring to mind with these very creative words.. The way it is written I could almost see a child whispering these words for some reason.. Great write!! So very beautiful in image and words..
    Peace to you, Jetleena


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 1, 2008

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    STUNNING !!!

    Stunning Writing here. Absolutely breathtaking imagery. I got lost in this. Well done for this fantastic piece.

    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x


  • AngelicMistress gold member
    March 12, 2008
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    THANK YOU!!!!!!!!

    René:

     

    I wish to take the time to thank you very much for having chosen my piece for the first prize, GOLD..... I wrote it and thought it would NOT win because it was a simple piece! Go figure! ;)

     

    Congratulations to all those that partook and won, and to those that did not win, all I say is to keep on penning, it all comes to all at the right time..... My love to all.....

     

    Blessed be with love and light always,

    As always your friend,

    AngelicMistress...Tanya 


  • sapphireangelwings
    March 12, 2008
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    Lovely piece that goes very nicely with the picture prompt. I can see why it won gold!


  • tomisb
    March 12, 2008

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    we are our own creations and you have caught it well.
    Love, Tom B.


  • poetryality silver member
    March 12, 2008
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    I love the mystery and magic of this poem. It flows with very little effort. The picture painted is one that very few get a chance to witness. You have brought this image to life with your words. Thank you for this entry and I wish you the very best in the Comp.


    Much Love & Light ♥

    Renee


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    Bravo!

    I like how you were inspired here, and came up with a winner!
    Thanks for sharing, you are so very gifted!
    Nice to read ya once again my friend, peace~

    -Timothy

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