Sun bursts lace my eyes
The tree of life has touched the skies
And rooted me deep underground
Follow that rabbit round and round
If they're coming for me...they wont find me
For I've licked the moon and sung with the sun
Danced with the devil and brought him mercy
Knelt with God's and gave them a freebie
The night beats with more,
than you ever thought before
And the day is just light on the moon
And the stars will be here soon
Departed from this dark vacuum
Into the waters of woman
will we wade in the woken
Where you never just assume
Light loves all and nothings broken
Follow me into the dark
Into the light
Into the center of the earth
Everything will be alright
whats going on in your portals girls and boys?
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Well,
I won't spank you,
unless you want me to.
You must find an avenue for your work.
It is outstanding.
There is a place in
everyones live for poetry like this.
Try to get as much exposure as possible,
There is a place for you in writing.
DON'T FORGET.... it is darkest before the poem.
BLESSINGS GYPSY,
LOWELL POE.
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If their coming for me...
Misspelled 'they're'
The background to this is awesome....and I also liked the poem. It was definately different....good job@ -
nice job! i love this poem it worked well. the background's really cool too.
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Portal full of prayers and pathos. I like your poem, again, I like the idea of the centre of the earth, similar to the idea of north - a direction that doesn't exist except in reference. And dark will lead to light, and everything will be alright. I'm waiting...
. Rewarded 6
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I'm waiting too.......
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this is captivating, I like the lines about the devil, and god's that was interesting. I also love the last stanza, very nice poet, keep it up.
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I love the ending ..good stuff
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