Why have you become an angel
leaving all your earlier birth
to the pangs of death?
You My beloved daughter why have you disappeared
just after eight years of stay on earth space- as a full circle
and obliged the call of the almighty?
we are happy, you are serving the Lord, at his behest
though we are practically deprived of your presence before us!
Author notes
PICTURE-PROMPT
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt - Over Night by poetryality.
875 points, ended March 12, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
This is a sad work of poetry that shares with the reader a lament, a sense of bereavement. God has all forms of nature in His heaven, and yes..."at His behest". I feel the longing for your faerie turned angel. Thank you for submitting this work of poetry in my contest. I wish you all the best.
Much Love & Light ♥
Renee
Adding your comment:
