Little Johnny
Always in my sight
Stealing peoples' money
Getting into fights
So many good memories
He always forgets his manners
Never says please
Oh well
We always run a muck
He usually casts a few spells
Makes people give me stuff
Like money, food and cars
Everything was going great
Till he came to me with a scar
It drove me insane
I couldn't stand it
Seeing him in pain
I'll get whoever did this
Not going to stop till whoever did it is dead
Don't care what the thing is
I'll cut off it's head
We searched everywhere
He was actually surprised
About how much I care
As we entered an old bar
We found the thing
That gave little Johnny the scar
Once I pulled out my gun
He swang
As I dodged it
Bang!
After that, we just went home
Drinking and watching cartoons
Eating ice cream cones
A contest entry
- Fantasy Person, Place or Creature by Gypsie Ink.
300 points, ended March 18, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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Nice
I really like the fact that at the end they just went on like it was just another day. A true treat the surprise ending. Thank you for your entry and Best of luck in the contest. -
A great write, you have really brought them to life. Even dark people can be loyal..lol. All the best in the contest.
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