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My Fairy Princess

Hi there Fairy Princess
Glowing in the moonlight
How graceful are your wings
As they stretch up into night
How serenly are your movements
Like a Ballerina on her toes
Your Fairy dust falls so evenly
Upon the flowers just below
I can hardly wait until next Spring
When I once again will hear you sing

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  • poetryality silver member
    March 12, 2008
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    This poem is filled with joy and delight. It makes the reader smile and know that faeries are as real as we portray them. You've done well in bring the image to life. Thank you for this entry and I wish you the best in the Comp.


    Much Love & Light ♥

    Renee


  • doesne1care
    March 12, 2008
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    aw, it paints a wonderful scene x


  • Purush
    March 11, 2008
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    woven well


    you have beautifully woven the verse with all good words
    best of luck in the contest


    • Katie Lazette
      March 11, 2008
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      Thank you Purush. You always have a kind comment on my poetry and I do appreciate it.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    Lovely

    Such a feel good read sweetie.
    Thanks for sharing, I'm all smiles now!
    Much love to you and yours!

    -Timothy

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