Your smile lights up my world
It sends shivers down my spine
You whisper in my ear
Baby you warm me up
Your voice is so soft and sweet
You have a way with words
Baby you know how to make me happy
You are in my dreams
You say you love me with everything you’ve got
You know that you are the reason I smile
Baby you are my love
You mean everything to me
You are the only one who could make me feel this way
Baby we have a special connection
Nothing could break this
People try to tear us apart
We ward them off
The love behind this is too great
Baby we have this shield that surrounds us
It blocks out everyone who tries to tear us apart
We have these emotions that bind us together
Baby I love you
A contest entry
- Celabration! Who wants to win 3000 points? by Mori-lux.
3060 points, ended March 29, 2008, 46 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Your words are bound by the emotions of your heart that seem so strong. You really are in love, I take it, and I'm happy for you. To be able to express such joy and paint a picture of happiness is one of the greatest gifts. Keep it up!
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Good emotion. Love almost to the point of naivety, and I like it. Brings back memories. Kudos and good luck. -Judge#2
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Very nice I enjoy love poems lol. It's a good write filled with good emotion. keep up the good work
Thanks for entering my contest good luck.
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