Her skin's too tight and her eyes are closed
Her smile and tears are juxtaposed
She needs a place to hang her head
Might just hang herself instead
She cut herself in the mirror last night
Trying to find another side to life
He wants to tell her she'll be alright-
But he loves her too much to lie,
He says he'll be on time
She says "I might be a little late"
He should have seen the signs
Now she'll never end his wait.
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i wish i could write a long review on this! but i must go. but it was loveeeeeeely!!loved it!
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Damn. I love this, honey.
I haven't read anything that rhymes in a long time.
This is good, babe, real good.
This is my favourite:
"He wants to tell her she'll be alright-
But he loves her too much to lie,"
Fabulous.
-Allura
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The second stanza is the most powerful, but the whole thing was like a punch in the stomach.
I love it.
I crave your work like a heroin addict.
I hate that you post so rarely.
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