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[ time lends sypathy to no one ]

time lends sypathy to no one

the laughter fades
as demeanours embrace
the fickle facade,

evening draws
its darkest shade

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  • still crazy
    March 17, 2008

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    I can relate

    I like this one. It says so much in so few words. every single one of us is hiding behind a facade.


    • the pauper prince
      March 20, 2008

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      thanks

      hey there smiley.

      what's shakin? can't talk too much right now.

      stay cool

      rich