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Someone

 

In your darkest hour,

I will light your way.

When things seem bleakest,

I will comfort you.

 

When you feel alone,

or you need to cry.

I’ll stand beside you,

wipe away your tears.

 

Turn and look my way,

I’ll always be there.

Remember always,

Someone, still loves you.

 

 

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My Hetane..You're still my inspiration, thanks for the visit.

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  • PureCountry
    April 13, 2008

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    Wonderful Words

    of dedication and eternal affection. Such bonds are rare and your appreciation shines through. Niaish for sharing.


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    April 7, 2008
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    We all need someone to lean on. This is a very well written message of love!


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 22, 2008

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    Certainly is always someone there who love us this is a great write Dear I love your background too Niaish for sharing


  • everyone1 gold member
    March 21, 2008

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    Willing.... and a peaceful and complete marriage of the woeful soul to the honest truth...

    I found it to be so very hopeful... and an honorable outpouring of the affections of God, that we all search for, and need...

    Just precious...

    ~ James ~


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    March 20, 2008

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    BREATH TAKING

    Your words pull the tears from my heart dear sister...i know you miss your Hetane so much and yet in your time of need he comes to remind you of his love:f...thank you love for sharing his thoughts with me as well*hug* Nemehotatse LittleWind *hug*


  • Angelflower
    March 19, 2008

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    Oh.. this was so sweet it brought tears to my eyes.. This was so beautifully written.. Great write..
    Peace to you, Jelteena


  • Elfin
    March 17, 2008
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    reading this was filled with sheer magic. Simple, sweet and packed with emotion. Well done. Val

  • JadeFlame
    March 15, 2008
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    This is such a sweet, beautiful poem filled with deep emotion. Thanks for sharing.


  • SpiritMother
    March 15, 2008

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    Your words spoke gently of what was given to me this past week. May you always be blessed. Thank you for the reminder, it was beautiful.


    • freespirit51
      March 15, 2008

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      SpiritMother

      Thanks for your kind words. My Hetane visits me in my dreams when he knows I need him. Glad you enjoyed.


  • tawk gold member
    March 14, 2008

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    We all need someone to be there for us. What a wonderful poem so filled with love. I so enjoyed reading. Niaish for sharing. Theresa

    • freespirit51
      March 15, 2008
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      tawk

      Thanks so much for visiting and reading my poem. I am glad it touched you. My Hetane still visits when he knows I need him.


  • liduen silver member
    March 12, 2008

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    short and sweet...and yet says all it needs to say. This peice is filled with feeling. Niaish for sharing.


    • freespirit51
      March 12, 2008
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      Katrina906

      Thanks for the kind words my friend and welcome to the family.


  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 12, 2008

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    Why don't I have someone who would write me wonderful things like this? It is short but very special and it says everything you would want to hear. Beautiful and niaish for sharing.

    • freespirit51
      March 12, 2008
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      LittleMoon

      Thanks my young friend for your kind words. My Hetane still comes to me when I need him. He seems to know from the battlefield in the sky when I need him the most.

  • SoulWhispher
    March 12, 2008
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    This is well written, you have put a lot of emotion in to this, great job, blessings John


    • freespirit51
      March 12, 2008
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      SoulWhispher

      Thanks for you wonderful words, Glad you enjoyed.


  • Lady Altheia
    March 12, 2008

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    Awww this is sweet. I wish someone said this to me. I don't have much of a light these days. Niaish for sharing.

    • freespirit51
      March 12, 2008
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      Lady Altheia

      Thanks for your kind words my friend. My Hetane visited me as I was falling asleep and spoke these words to me. He seems to know when I need his words. Even after his passing.


  • Capt Jed silver member
    March 11, 2008

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    I like that

    It was short, but that's OK it says a lot in those verses. I could feel a lot of caring and felt a sense of emotion too. I thought it all fit together very well and has an appropriate title. Good job!


    • freespirit51
      March 12, 2008
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      Capt Jed

      thanks so much for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed it.


  • Brooklynn Tainted gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    Turn and look my way,

    I’ll always be there.

    Remember always,

    Someone, still loves you.

    wow this is great and this is my favorite part you did a great job with this one keep writing because you show talent in your words

    • freespirit51
      March 11, 2008
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      controled-by-demons

      Thanks for your very kind words. This poem does mean alot to me and I was glad I was able to be able to write it.

  • Dolores
    March 11, 2008

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    It was nice . Really simple, but it didn't need to be complicated. It wasn't for me but I feel good any way.


    • freespirit51
      March 11, 2008
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      Dolores

      Thanks my friend for your generous words. I am glad it touched you.


  • arafura gold member
    March 11, 2008
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    Very touching my friend!

    • freespirit51
      March 11, 2008
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      arafura

      Thanks so much for your kind words as usual. Seems My Hetane always comes and speaks to me when I need him most. These were his words to me last night as I was falling to sleep.


  • I am a Mindfreak
    March 11, 2008

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    It's always great when you find that one person who can help you get through anything that may come your way. I know I have some of the bestest friends in the world, and I know that if anything...I could always turn to them through my toughest days.
    Title: It gives the reader a sense of knowing that this poem is written for a person that means a lot to you.
    "In your darkest hour" that first line right away gives the reader the idea that this person has been by your side at a time when you most needed someone.
    "Someone, still loves you" that's a perfect line to end the poem because it shows that that person will always be there for you, no matter what. Great write and keep up the great work.

    • freespirit51
      March 11, 2008
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      I am a Mindfreak

      Thanks for your beautiful words. Yes this person did and still does mean alot to me. He was reported killed in January but his spirit still visits me. He is always beside me and I can always feel his heart next to mine.


  • whits end silver member
    March 11, 2008
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    Comforting

    This is a hopeful, soothing piece of artwork. I love it!


    • freespirit51
      March 11, 2008
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      whits end

      Thanks so much for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed.

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