Kneeling before her presence in splendorous reverence
Anticipating the ambrosial wonder of her blushing flesh
Mystical charms evoke salacious inventions of lust
As she squirms like a serpent with beguiling precision
Seducing my mind and body into oblivious intoxication
Underneath the moonlight of aphrodisiacal persuasion
Time suspends into overlapping ecstasy as we're
Raptured into the paradise of endless passion
Aligned under a constellation of Kamasutra bliss
A contest entry
- kamasutra by Godless But Divine.
650 points, ended March 13, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is certainly a sensual poem in all aspects of the word. I love the language you use here, it adds to the sensuality of the piece....job well done!
All the best in the contest!
Concrete Angel
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APHRODITE
Aphrodite and charm few who know
That Kamasutra and you were bound and sew
Using the serpent to penetrate dreams
And on the flesh to paint it with sacred streams.
Excellent poem, liquidly passioned and charmly painted..thank you for the entery,goodluck.
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WOW..Enough said here Darell as always your piece leaves the person feeling you.
best wishes i n this contest
Always
Passions
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Loved this entry,
Sensual & delightful.
Good luck.
E
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wow! sensual indeed. great work dear poet
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