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Did I lock the door?

Did I lock the door
I know I closed it
Hmm do I go back
Tamatos

What about tamatos

I wonder if Dave is home

I need to go to the bathroom

Where a tree when you need one

Or a rock

Is that my cell

Why'd I think that 

I don't have one

What about the door

Screw it

I got to pee

Now where's that key

Author notes

'ello, this is just some random stuff that anyone might think when going out jogging. Maybe.


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  • omg-its-sara
    May 21, 2008

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    this is FUNNY!

    "what about tomatos"
    That was the best line.

    Thanks for entering my contest!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    April 28, 2008

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    hehe this made me chuckle and i love the randomness within this . its beautifully written best of luck in the contest


  • TrevLove
    April 23, 2008

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    hAHAHA very nice! simple and easy to understand, random and flowwing, very realistic!!! i feel like we are really similar, hit me up sometime!!!

    <3


  • l33tm4n
    April 22, 2008

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    Random thoughts flowing through mi head. You are, again I \/\/|11 sa\|/ i+, l33t!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    The sashimi in space is great.

    -l33tm4n

  • WillXxXYouXxXBe...
    April 4, 2008

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    randomisness

    i lovers this. (chickenbutt) people say im random. but im like, no im not. (Ba-cock!!!!!!!!!!) but they disagree.


  • blackxxroses-aurora
    March 28, 2008
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    I love it! randomness rocks!!!


  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    March 18, 2008

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    Hahaha! This is cute and funny. Totally real, how thoughts can go from one thing to another, here to there and back again... I love it.


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    March 11, 2008
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    HAHAHA! very appropriate for this contest, and thank you.

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