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Wishes and Dreams

When I believed in fairies
They looked just like she does
One retrieved my first lost tooth
And left me money, just because

But now I believe in butterflies and angels
Which when joined together might be a fairy
And they lite and bring light to many
And wishes and dreams they carry

To way beyond the clouds, and label them as prayers
They wrap them up in gold and then they leave them there.

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  • Itahed
    April 30, 2008
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    a lovely piece for a children or inspirational book. loved it!!!!!!!!


  • poetryality silver member
    March 12, 2008

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    "But now I believe in butterflies and angels
    Which when joined together might be a fairy"

    I adore those lines, they are as innocent as some faeries. I love the thought here, what you left me thinking after I got done reading. It created a grand smile on my face.

    Thank you for this delightful entry. I wish you the best in the Comp.


    Much Love & Light ♥

    Renee


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    What a lovely poem about this fairy in the picture prompt. Looks very
    much like a sonnet you have penned here. Quite a combination of angel, butterflies and fairies.


  • secberm
    March 11, 2008
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    I think fairies are for girls. Hmmm... Must be that sugar and spice thing. Me, I liked trolls and gremlins. Until of course, they made a movie of gremlins and toys of trolls. Too cute for my taste. LOL

    Well done sister. Love the picture you painted. (I'm gonna use that for the lil one )

    Dez